Death Alley (Cathy)

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Book name: Death Alley

Author name: the_snek

Reviewer : CathrineRajkumar

Review:

Title: (Titre) 9/10

Your title is good and unique.

Cover: ( Couverture) 9/10


Cover is the one that attracts the readers' attention first. Your cover is good and it suits your story well.

Blurb ( La description): 8/10

The description is really good and it increases my curiosity to know what happens next in the story and also to know why Radhika is targeted.

Storyline (Scénario): 9/10


The story line is really good. In every chapter, it increases the curiosity to know what happens next.


Dialogue/Expression: 9/10

Creativity/originality (La créativité/ Originalité): 9/10


Overall engagement (Engagement glibal): 9/10

Characters (Personnages): 8/10

All the characters are portrayed well, they conveyed the emotions really well. May it be anger, guilt, love, betrayal everything is portrayed well.

Grammar ( Grammaire): 9/10

There aren't any grammatical errors or typos. You really did a great job.

Flow ( Couler): 9/10


The flow is good. There is no interruption in the story.

Reviewer's opinion ( Critique):

I really loved the story. You did a great job in writing this story.

So your total score is 88/100 or 4.4/5

All the best for your future


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