Author : Charmed_Sunshine_22
Reviewer : aayshaikh18
Title/Titre : (9/10):
The title of the story is fantastic. It attracts the reader to the story and also it's relatable to the plot. You get to know the how the story is by reading the title which is quite rare.
Cover/Couverture : (7/10):
The cover seems really alluring. It attracts the reader to read the story and also related to the story I liked the cover.
Blurb/La Description : (3/10) :
Talking about the blurb, though you have given the warning about the story there is no description what the story is about and the reader would be really unhappy with that and may not be interested in reading the story.
Storyline/Scénario : (10/10):
Being honest, the story line was really beautiful and unique, most probably the stories about the rape are based on girls but this story help us to understand that everytime a girl is not right and we should firstly know the whole story before pointing finger at anyone. I personally loved the story.
Dialogue/Expression : (8/10):
The dialogues were totally on the point and were in the accordance with the story. The expression of each and every person, main characters or side characters was expressed perfectly. But I would like to say the name you have used like evilika for the antagonist I feel like they were little unprofessional.
Creativity/Originality (La créativité/Originalité) (9.5/10):
The creativity of the story is fabulous. It was also quite unique and original.
Overall engagement/Engagement global (7.5/10):
The overall engagement was nice but the blurb and some names used were not that alluring and professional.
Grammar /Grammaire (10/10):
The grammar was used rightly and I have no complain on that one.
Character/ Personnages(9.5/10):
The characters of the story were on to the point weither it be the protagonist, antagonist or side characters.
Flow/Couler (10/10):
The best part about the story was the flow, it was not to rushed nor was stretched. It exactly portrayed the agenda or the plot of the story. The way you didn't stretch the story after he was proven innocent was nice.
Reviewer's opinion ( Critique):
The story was fantastic but it lacks in some areas like the blurb and some words used in the story. That's the thing you need to change. other than that it's fine.
The overall point to the story are 83.5/100.
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