Author: Dipanwita86
Reviewed by girly_blush
Title (Titre):
The title is the base of the story. And of course, it should be short and catchy.
Here, the title suited the storyline. It had a mystery touch too. Also, it had
increased my curiosity as a reader. Good job!
Cover (couverture):
The cover is the first thing that attracts a reader to check a book out. Here, the
cover was too attractive and impressive. The scheme of colour used was so
amazing. Also, the fonts used were so appealing to the cover. I loved the cover,
personally.
Blurb (la description)
A good blurb is very much crucial to a story as it takes out the interest of a reader
to glance at the story. The blurb of the story wasn't good enough. It wasn't that
ingenious. You could have explained the scenario to give the reader a little
knowledge of the story's proceeding. You should definitely work on the blurb.
Storyline (scènario)
The storyline wasn't uncommon. There are plenty of stories in Wattpad with the
same plot. But still, your narration was understandable and good.
Characters (personnages)
The characters were introduced well. I liked the way how you explained their
behaviour and attitude towards each other. The way you have portrayed Arnav
and Khushi's relation was good. But, Arnav's character and his emotions weren't
weaved nicely. In fact, his character was confusing.
Flow (Couler)
I can't say that the flow of the story was flawless. I have felt a break throughout
the story. The way you wrote the flashback and further scenes weren't appreciative. At some places, you have hurried the scenes. So, the flow of the story was ruined.
Grammar (grammaire)
The grammar was simple and understanding. You have a grip in words. But there were some punctuational errors. Also, at some points, tenses were abruptly
changed. Kindly do check it.
Reviewer's opinion (critique):
As I mentioned earlier, alter your blurb. The storyline was good. Just edit the
punctuation errors. It's noticeable. Also, you should work on the dialogues. The
emotions weren't craved well. Try to describe the scenarios and situations well.
That would help.
Hope this review was helpful. Do complete the payment of your reviewer. If done please ignore
Regards,
Juhi and pourni
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