Book name - Her silent steps
Author- MissPifty
Reviewer - TanviSowgandika
TITLE(Titre)
The title of the story is very unique but it doesn't go very well with your plot , as there is nothing related to the title in your story . So , please change it into something which matches to the storyline.
Cover(coverture)
The cover of that story is not that attractive but it looks good and gives a vibe of the story that it belongs to late 18th or 19th century but I suggest you to write the author's name where it's more visible as I personally couldn't find it until I searched for it twice or thrice .Other than that everything was good in the cover like picture selection , font size and colour.
Blurb(la description)
The blurb was very beautiful and very well written and it gives a small gist about what the story is actually about . It really makes the readers curious to look into the story .
Storyline(scenario)
The story line is very well written and interesting I seriously do want to read more chapters . There are some scene like her father being in a far off place and many other scenes so I request you to add the name of the place where the story is taking place because its becomes a bit confusing who is expressing it and where it is happening like in camp or in her house or some another place.
Grammer(grammerie)
The grammar part of the story is very well maintained throughout the story but you used many old words and old english even though you have given some of the meanings of the words at the end . I suggest you to write their translations in brackets near those expressions . As there are many people who are not really interested into old english or not aware of those expressions and then that makes them to scroll down or search the meaning about those expressions which makes them lose their interest in the story.
Characters(personages)
The characters played their roles very well in the story but you have not given any character sketch of the characters which makes the readers very confusing about them and often makes them go back to previous chapters to get a clear view .So please give a brief description of the characters it makes it a lot better and easier.
Flow(couler)
The flow of the story is very good and it was neither too slow nor too fast it made the readers to involve in the story , and also there were no breaks in the story so very good work in detailing.
Reviewer's opinion(critique)
The plot was very unique but kindly edit your cover a bit so that author's name is visible do mention the place like where , what is happening and give translations where ever you have used old expressions . Give a small character sketch other than this the story is good you have pulled it really well.
Thank you
TANVI
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