Tera yaar hoon main (Tanvi)

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Book name : Tera yaar hoon main
Author's name: KristinAnne11
Reviewer: TanviSowgandika

Review:

Title: (Titre)

The title of the story is apt for it your story . It actually tells the readers about what story is really about.

Cover:(couverture)

The cover looks beautiful. It is apt for your story .The size and colour of the font is in contrast to the pictures. And the background which makes the cover more attractive.

Blurb:(la description)

The blurb of the story is amazing but do give the gist of the story.It gives the readers the idea about what the story is actually about .

Storyline:(scènario)

The plot of the story was amazing and kept the readers intact to it .

Grammar:(grammaire)

There were some grammatical mistakes in the story.Like "Naira huffed at this comment of his" instead of this you could have written it like "Naira huffed at his comment".Even there are some mistakes in the use of tenses and typos.

Characters:(personnages)

The characters have played their role well in the story .Every character was given equal importance in the plot .

Flow:( Couler)

There aren't any breaks in the story. The pace of the story was also good as it was neither very fast or slow .

Reviewer opinion:( critique)

Overall, the story is amazing. The main highlights were your cover,plot and flow and do reduce your grammatical mistakes so that it attracts the readers .I hope this review helps you.

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