Author: p00fff2
Reviewer:simrangharge
Title/Titre : (10/10)
Simple and Accurate.
Cover/Couverture : (9/10)
Looks like a classic novel.
Blurb/La Description : (10/10)
Loved the description, very intriguing, it makes the readers want to open and read what is inside.
Plot and Flow - (16/20)
I felt the starting chapters were at a slow pace and got a bit boring due to that, I mean not lot was happening. The actual story started around the 20th chapter, from then it got pretty interesting. I understood that this was like only the build up to get to the main part in book 2, so I guess that worked fine.
Dialogue/Expression - (8/10)
Dialogue delivery is pretty decent.
Grammar/Grammaire : (8/10)
Grammar is good with some very negligible errors here and there but since it's in the process of being edited, we can just let it go.
Creativity/originality(La créativité/Originalité) : (8/10)
I like the plot. Looking forward to read the main concept of the story in book 2.
Overall engagement/Engagement global : (17/20)
Looks good so far and it's a good build up for book 2 I guess. I personally loved the graphics you used, specially the aesthetics were beautiful and so pleasant to look at, I could just spend my time looking at those. Loved all the characters in story.
Total - (86/100)
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