Author: neha_satakshi
Reviewer: dramaqueen_Nahar
Title/Titre: 10/10
Cover/Couverture: 10/10
Blurb/La Description: 07/10
I think your story description isn't that intriguing to make a reader curious to read this story. You should make it more interesting a scene from plot that has a twist.
Storyline/Scénario: 8/10
A very decent storyline. I loved they way you narrated the whole situation. It was described beautifully. But I think you need to highlight the past happening a little more.
Dialogue/Expression: 9/10
Dialogue delivery is good.
Creativity/originality(La créativité/Originalité) : 8/10
It's an amazing concept. The story is full of twists and turns.
Overall engagement/Engagement global : 9/10
Overall the story was good.
Grammar/Grammaire : 10/10
Characters/Personnages : 8/10
Few characters should be highlighted. Such as Lord's character. I know he is a mystery but his character needs to be described more.
Flow/Couler : 9/10
Story flow was good. But I felt few incident were dragged for so long.
Reviewer's opinion:- You should rewrite your story blurb and put more twist and turns in it as it should be more interesting to create curiosity in a reader. Otherwise this story is good.
Total - 88/100
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