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In Cold Blood
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Final Verdict (Also just one judge)
Spelling and Grammar (5): 4
Character Portrayals and Story Canon (15):15
Writing [Dialogue, description, etc.] (20): 19
Plot (30): 30
Fan Votes (10): 9.3
Judges Vote (20): 20
Total: 97.3
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Spelling and Grammar (5): 4
Character Portrayals and Story Canon (15): 15
Writing [Dialogue, description, etc.] (20): 19
Plot (30): 30
Fan Votes (10): 9.3
Judges Vote (20): 20
Total: 97.3
Additional Comments: I love this, dude. I honestly don't have any critiques and I'm not gonna nit-pick to try and find one. [Name]'s family life is fantastic. I probably enjoyed reading the conversation between Gippal, Maqui, and [Name] a little too much hah. It only got better when her dad bust up in there bellowing. The translations Gippal gave were perfection. This is perfection, damn you. Then it moves on to prison. I got really excited when Ursula walked by I just died. She's in prison for ripping a girl's throat out? A freaking plus, dude. On top of that, I really like the prison crowd you introduced in this one to interact with [Name]. Good job, and keep it up.
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