After Earth's Fall

After Earth's Fall

49.4K Reads 3.7K Votes 58 Part Story
Sophie_Louise246 By Sophie_Louise246 Completed

"Humanity's pride and greed will be the death of us" 

In 2025 B.E.F that saying couldn't have been more than true.

After a devastating nuclear explosion had scorched one side of the world, people were forced to leave their home planet to Mars. A few millenniums after the global crisis, an ambitious girl, Nila, aspires to go to Earth like the rest of her colleagues. Though, when she arrives, it's not what she had expected and suspects something much sinister is going on. 

|HIGHEST RANK: #6 in Science Fiction|

I'm definitely going to continue, I can see you spent a lot of time on the first chapter, making it easy to read... with the absence of info overload... We appreciate all that ❤
Honestly this is way better and more descriptive about habitats on Mars than the science presentation I did about that topic xD
Chooky65 Chooky65 Sep 02
That moment you start to sing along with the song even if it is 1.25am. 
                              I hope the neighbours liked my singing, too!
Nyt3Sh4d3 Nyt3Sh4d3 Aug 29
so the main character is a friend of the son in second in command. How nifty
Your first chapter had plenty of meat, it hooked me pretty good. I wasn't making an effort to notice, but I didn't see any grammatical issues either. I especially liked the potential tension you created with the leader's son and the food he shared.
Chooky65 Chooky65 Sep 02
Ps. My youngest son is on here and he badgered me to read your story knowing that if I have it a chance I would like.
                              He was right! I love it so far.