From Soldier's Rifle, To Dragon's Wing's (2012 Watty Awards)(Book 1)

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Tristan Hungate By taro619 Completed
There are many things we don't know about in the mysterious world of the military, Project Draco is one of them. I was recruted into this project against my own will at the age of 14. My life went from normal to dodging bullets everyday of my life. You could say that I know death personally. But when you have wings, scales, talons, and can breath fire, you already have a target on your head It's just a matter of time. This is the story of my life, as a Project Draco recruit............as a dragon.
Hey, I really like your idea so far!  A small suggestion might be to go back and edit your chapters so that you have more paragraphs (I know I still have to do this with some of my stories since I copied and pasted them from MS Word and it messed up my formatting).  The military description stuff is great, and I think you should add to it now.  Try slowing it down slightly by adding more description to the scenary, to Sorrel, to the clanking of metal boots and drone of voices, etc.  I really like how you've started to describe all the crazy lab techs all over the place.  Great job so far, and I'll try and read more as soon as I get some more free time. :)
Hey, I really like your idea so far!  A small suggestion might be to go back and edit your chapters so that you have more paragraphs (I know I still have to do this with some of my stories since I copied and pasted them from MS Word and it messed up my formatting).  The military description stuff is great, and I think you should add to it now.  Try slowing it down slightly by adding more description to the scenary, to Sorrel, to the clanking of metal boots and drone of voices, etc.  I really like how you've started to describe all the crazy lab techs all over the place.  Great job so far, and I'll try and read more as soon as I get some more free time. :)
Hey, I really like your idea so far!  A small suggestion might be to go back and edit your chapters so that you have more paragraphs (I know I still have to do this with some of my stories since I copied and pasted them from MS Word and it messed up my formatting).  The military description stuff is great, and I think you should add to it now.  Try slowing it down slightly by adding more description to the scenary, to Sorrel, to the clanking of metal boots and drone of voices, etc.  I really like how you've started to describe all the crazy lab techs all over the place.  Great job so far, and I'll try and read more as soon as I get some more free time. :)
Hey, I really like your idea so far!  A small suggestion might be to go back and edit your chapters so that you have more paragraphs (I know I still have to do this with some of my stories since I copied and pasted them from MS Word and it messed up my formatting).  The military description stuff is great, and I think you should add to it now.  Try slowing it down slightly by adding more description to the scenary, to Sorrel, to the clanking of metal boots and drone of voices, etc.  I really like how you've started to describe all the crazy lab techs all over the place.  Great job so far, and I'll try and read more as soon as I get some more free time. :)
Hey, I really like your idea so far!  A small suggestion might be to go back and edit your chapters so that you have more paragraphs (I know I still have to do this with some of my stories since I copied and pasted them from MS Word and it messed up my formatting).  The military description stuff is great, and I think you should add to it now.  Try slowing it down slightly by adding more description to the scenary, to Sorrel, to the clanking of metal boots and drone of voices, etc.  I really like how you've started to describe all the crazy lab techs all over the place.  Great job so far, and I'll try and read more as soon as I get some more free time. :)
Hey, I really like your idea so far!  A small suggestion might be to go back and edit your chapters so that you have more paragraphs (I know I still have to do this with some of my stories since I copied and pasted them from MS Word and it messed up my formatting).  The military description stuff is great, and I think you should add to it now.  Try slowing it down slightly by adding more description to the scenary, to Sorrel, to the clanking of metal boots and drone of voices, etc.  I really like how you've started to describe all the crazy lab techs all over the place.  Great job so far, and I'll try and read more as soon as I get some more free time. :)