The Lost Uchiha (A Naruto Fanfiction) [On Hold]

The Lost Uchiha (A Naruto Fanfiction) [On Hold]

8 Part Story 6.3K Reads 168 Votes
Ambrose By Ambrose Updated Sep 20, 2012

Raiden Uchiha was born to a beautiful family but what happened after his birth that caused him to become one of Orochimaru's prisoner's and test subject? And what happened to his family ? He doesn't know his past or if he even has any family but by a lucky get away and a savior he finally gets to the Konoha village where he finds friends, love, enemies, a home, and his lost past. Follow him in his adventure and see how the story unravels !

cielrandegre cielrandegre Jul 06, 2014 05:48AM
Heheheh guys with long hair.... I can smell sexy rolling off him ;)
GeTeno GeTeno Sep 05, 2012 03:17AM
Wow. I know almost squat about Nautro yet I can read this and understand what's going on! You did a great job! I can wait to read more.
coraltear coraltear Aug 17, 2012 10:10PM
@Ambrose yep! Can you read mine and comment like the deal said?
Ambrose Ambrose Aug 17, 2012 10:04PM
@coraltear u have to keep reading on in the next chapters.... lmao
coraltear coraltear Aug 17, 2012 10:00PM
This is good. I wonder why Nori wouldn't tell him she's his sister, and why is she there? Does she not recognize him....?
coraltear coraltear Aug 17, 2012 09:57PM
Short, but good. I do think you could have made it a bit longer though. Great job, I love your writing. It does need some editing, nothing too big, but one spelling mistake I found is 'Yea' which is actually spelt 'Yeah' good job though!