Book: Painted With your Blood by ticklinguel
Reviewed by: MounaRao
Grammatical Construction : 9
I found it a bit messed up in the starting but as the story proceeded you got the hang of it.
Grammatical Errors : 9
Again, I had this issue only at the start. You juggled with your tenses a lot. Try avoiding that.
Easily Understood : 7
Your story is a bit complex to understand. Probably it had got something to do with it being a fanfiction about which I had no idea about. But as the story proceeded, I got the hang of it. Since it is the first few chapters that capture your readers, you should be careful in how you portraying your story.
Use of Vocabulary : 10
You were good in this department. You made the most of it.
Use of Punctuation marks : 9
You have a few misplaced commas here and there, nothing a quick read wouldn't correct.
Portrait of the story in the title of the book : 10
Since your book is based on action sequences and suspense, your title fits in well.
Lessons gained : 10
Character sketch : 9
You did well while describing and portraying your characters but you could do better.
Score: 73/80
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