Book:- Images On Paper
Author:- wildwolf708
Reviewed by:- Fifa_Anayd
Use of figure of speech used:- 9
You made us feel what happened, not simply show and tell. This is an admirable feat and I want you to be proud of this.
Portrait of feelings:- 9
Almost all of the poems portrayed one single emotion; the terrors of being alone. Though it did feel like each poem was linked to the other,
Grammatical construction:- 9
Hardly any errors but there are still some that need to be replaced.
Lessons gained:- 9
To love even when won't be loved and to stay strong in the worst situations. A beautiful lesson in each of your poems.
The relation between the title and the poem:- 9
The title was greatly influenced by the poem. You portrayed a single word into an abundant of definitions.
Is the poem speaking for itself:- 8
Even without the title, one can see that you don't particularly rely on the topic to relay your thoughts and imagination. The title is just there and the poem describes why it is.
Personal Value:- 9
I enjoyed it a little too much. Each poem was different but at the same time, it was similar. It had the same message that even I don't know how to put it in words.
Total- 62/70 marks
THANK YOU
KAMU SEDANG MEMBACA
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