Author :- lily97000
Reviewed by :- RookyWriters
Grammatical construction :- 10
Grammatical construction is persuasive. You take your time to emphasize a point made by the characters, which is good. Each feelings, touch, sound, movement was very well explained. It's really applaudable and a strength on your side. Because I wouldn't even have the energy to write so widely like that. Good job.
Grammatical errors :- 10
There are no errors in the story.
Easily understood :- 10
Half hope half love is a short story about heartbreak and new love. Yes the story is easily understood
Use of vocabulary :- 1
Good vocabulary. Good choice of words for a romance book.
Use of punctuation marks :- 10
There are no punctuation errors.
Portray of the story and the book title :- 10
Plotting is done nicely. The story has a plot of a short story and it feels like everything is about to end between the characters. Good plotting.
Lessons gained :- 10
The writer elaborated on not neglecting the people around you who may love you. The person closest to you can be your true love not necessarily the person far away.
Half love, half hope, as a title perfectly fits the story. At first readers might wonder what kind of title is that? But as you read on, there are hints of half love going on with half hopes among the characters. Good story.
Score :- 70/70
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