Good day! This story has been officially deemed unsalvageable. Sorry for making you all wait only to release an announcement like this.
However! If you're still interested, I'm currently rewriting Crimson Thread. After that, I'll be rewriting The Downfall as well. The Downfall will be under a different title and it will be a lot less messy. If you're curious to find out more about what I have in store, I posted a message about it. Just check my profile. There should be a lot to look forward to, I think bc I'm gonna focus a lot less on canon plot, but even if I do have Kohana's story overlap with it, I'll be tweaking canon according to how I imagine Kishi's characters should act in certain situations (but also within the context of the Crimson Thread universe).
(Please validate me you don't realize how embarrassed I am to still be working on this. I love what I've done and I don't wanna have any regrets when I die and stuff but it's still really embarrassing.)
