Hey this is just short :)
Yeah I just wanted to you know... get a full feedback from your guys :P
I would like you to answer a few questions so that I know how to make this better for the future parts of the story :D
A) Do you like the pace that it is going? or is it much too slow and long for your liking?
B) Am I capturing the original characters well enough on their personality? or are they completely different to you or are they just fine?
C) What do you think of the general idea of the story? :P is it unique enough or.... "cliche" and "expectable" to you?
D) Are you getting sick of Kristen's....how do you put it.... bipolar thoughts and feelings towards Leo?
E) What do you think of my new characters? (Kristen, Alfire, Josh, Zach, etc.) [personality wise]
F) Do you guys want me to add a character list to show how I imagine the characters of my story? Or would you rather just stick to using your own imagination and the descriptions in the text? [majority vote wins :P will give you guys a week vote]
G) And lastly, who do you ship with Kristen, and what would you imagine their ship name to be? :P
and complaint wise, I am guessing most of it..... grammar and length of waiting time and other stuff... got it. haha but if there's anything else please tell me
But yes, please answer this guys in the comment below!!! :D
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Remember Me? (Percy Jackson-- Leo Valdez Fanfic)
FanfictionKristen Black lost her best friend right after their 14th birthday; after she walked into the woods and disappeared; after a boy she grew close to came and left. No one knows if Diana is alive or dead, not a trace of her was left. Three years later...
