Otherworldly

Chapter 14- Part 2

A/N- Here's the long awaited chapter. This chapter consists of  3,200 words. It's almost three times as long as my normal chapters. 

Chapters are now going to be posted every Monday. It gives me the weekend to add some final touches. I have chapters for the next few weeks scheduled. 

The story is going to start progressing now. Just be prepared for what you might read. 

Over the weekend, I left a update talking about creating a patreon. I talked to some professionals and publishers while the poll was up. Many of you seem to be supportive of the idea of early released chapters, so I'm going to pursue the idea. This chapter is a sample of what the length of the chapters will be in the future. 

I plan on publishing this book in the future. So, I'm going to keep updating on the free sites (Wattpad, Inkitt, and Sweek), but only once or twice a month after I start a patreon. I haven't decided how often, but I'm leaning more towards once per month to be fair to the people paying for early releases. I plan on starting a patreon in a month or so. 

After I have completed this book and all chapters have been posted for free after several months, they will be removed from this site before publishing. The other books that will be written in this series will not be available for free. They will be posted on Patreon before undergoing publishing as well. 

I will start writing other books for free that have similar genres to this one. I have made these decisions based on advice from people that have several books published, so I'm confident they know what they are doing.  

I just want to thank some of the people that are super supportive. I read your comments and I appreciate you for your positivity and encouragement!

Sorry if the dialogue sucks. I'm going to fix it in the future. Writing dialogue is one of the things I struggle with.

Make sure to vote if you like the chapter!

-T.N. Jewell

My cheek throbbed. I groggily opened my eyes to see that we were stopped. My vision was too hazy and I was too tired to make out where we were.

I groaned when the door was opened and I was set on my feet. I wobbled for a bit, but luckily the Leften kept me from falling over.

I grudgingly trudged next to him as we approached a very large building. It was so large, that when I craned my neck up I couldn't even see the top in the clouds. This building was massive.

I could barely make out any intricate details from this low on the ground. The wall in front of us was smooth but had to be as long as four football fields.

A Leften was waiting along the wall in front of us and I couldn't stop the audible gulp when I saw him. He was one scary motherfucker.

His skin was a dark grey and his horns had a red hue. Black hair sat atop of his head and he was just as big as the guy I saw when we arrived at this massive planet.

I had wondered how big the planet was from how long we traveled, but I was too much of a coward to ask.

We approached the Leften and the one dragging me said a clipped phrase before the big guy gave a single jerk of his head and a doorway slid open. It was a small door and I had an inkling of suspicion that I was being snuck in.

We passed through the doorway and it closed with a quiet hum behind us. The hallway was dark and a little damp as we traversed through. We made several twists and turns with just bare walls to see. I also didn't see any other Leftens and my unease grew.