Okay.
This story is seriously confusing me!!!!!!!!
I didn't quite get what happened. Make more relations!!
Who are they?
How do they relate to Narina? (Just so you know...'narina' is Italian for nostril...lol)
How close where they?
How did they meet?
Other close friends?
Okay...clear it up. It's choppy and hard to understand most of the time!
Noname O.o
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