XxamoraXcarolinexX.
Interesting, original.
'Louse' is actually spelled lose.
Lots of run on sentences!
That's a no-no. :(
Interesting.
xox, Julian
CITEȘTI
BOOK SUGGESTIONS/ CRITICIZE FOR FREE! :)
AlteleHave you ever wanted somebody to critique your stories and/or give some tips? Well I'm here for the job! In the comments area, suggest your story here and I will tell you my opinion, if you should continue, and some tips to entice your readers to r...
