So, anky0909,
No corrections, nice pace, interesting flash-backs to fill in the readers of the character's history. I love the ninja idea! I have a small obsession with ninjas. ^_^
Keep going! It should attract readers like bees to flowers!
xox, Noname O.o
P.S. I can't believe I could not critique it!!
Date: 2 February 2011
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