Hey MoonLighter!!
Totally awesome, you know?
I love sci-fi, you describe everything perfectly, except I am still confused about the God Cell; where did it come from? Was it created? What did it originally do?
Also, where are they, and what about te rest of the world? Awesome, keep it going, answer those questions in the story!!!!
Noname O.o
Date: 28 April 2011
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