So, LuchiaLayton,
This is the perfect story for anyone who loves mermaids (Not me :( ) AND for those who love faeries (me!) !
Unfortunately, I am only on chapter two, and has just been introduced to Gabe and Lach, and have figured out the story. Let's see if I'm right...
A chapter and one paragraph later...
Whoa! That completely threw me off! Not what I was expecting!! But why does she go to a human shool?
Very cool story, just watch out for spelling mistakes!
Noname O.o
Date: 3 March 2011
YOU ARE READING
BOOK SUGGESTIONS/ CRITICIZE FOR FREE! :)
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