madmel211994
Pretty good! Except... Ewe......... I did NOT like chapter seven, sorry I'm only thirteen ewe. ewe. ewe. EWE. Okay I have to stop being extremely grossed out and I have to do a review.
Okay, I like your description, maybe use longer and more labyrinthine words in the future?
You tend to forget to put proper capitalization, and as my English teacher said: A good first impression makes a more likely read. You'll find I said something along the same lines in my other reviews.
Okay then. Not much for me to review you already finished the book. Okay then.
Happened a bit fast. Pretty good.
Noname O.o
Date: 18 June 2011
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