Hey FrancescaAnnaliseDaviesCaceres!
Can I call you Francesca? FrancescaAnnaliseDavies-Caceres is bit long...;) lol.
Anyways, this was an interesting book to read but it didn't keep my attention for long. Try adding a prologue! Like, one paragraph that is a life-or-death situation for the main character of the story!
Interesting all the same, Noname O.o
Date: 1 April 2011
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