The Leaf?

The Leaf?

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Somethin By High5sgoaround Completed

Ida Ayumin is now 11.  She left her old clan when she was 6.  Feeling alone, and exhausted she is discovered outside the Leaf village.  Ida usally doesn't get mad that much, and doesn't seem like she knows of a bad day.

That's all false though.  Ida has been beaten, forced to murder, and had the lives of her two best friends threatened by the people who were supposed to love her most.  That would be part of the reason Ida ran away, and came upon the Leaf.

She doesn't regret leaving, but she is grateful for some of the skills she picked up.  Becuase of her clan, Ida is great at coming up with war strategies, and she can use pretty much every weapon.  Even though, Ida still swore revenge on them.

Disadvantages though, is that she isn't really used to being around people, and she doesn't know how most people react when someone is a little...different.  So when she does come to be around people, how will she act?  Can she seem normal, and get used to people?  Or will her past haunt her too much?  Will her desire for revenge take over everything?

disclaimer- i do not own Naruto or any of the characters beside my own.

  • chunin
  • clan
  • exam
  • humor
  • jutsu
  • kobuto
  • leaf
  • naruto
  • ninja
  • orochimaru
  • power
  • sound
  • telekenisis
1girlx2lives 1girlx2lives Jun 29, 2017
I like the book so far. I spotted a few spelling mistakes but other than that, it's an amazing start
Pixxx_BTS Pixxx_BTS Dec 29, 2017
Commenting behalf of my 'apparent' friends who FORCING me *sigh...*
Enchanted_Otaku Enchanted_Otaku Dec 29, 2017
^^^ I wanted to see her reaction because of how much I enjoyed this book
1girlx2lives 1girlx2lives Jun 29, 2017
Ya right now, I think Ida should be the 10 year old while Himoten should be the 6 year old
Just_Call_Me_Jo Just_Call_Me_Jo May 14, 2017
                              Wow. So, um, kid, where did you're mom learn this...? From Beelzebub?
                              Seems legit.
.. Ducklings?....*thinking of Sasuke's duckbutt hair*.. SASUKE HAS CHILDREN?!!?!?!