She's Broken

She's Broken

37 Part Story 6.7M Reads 150K Votes
Kate By Lilohorse Completed

'Watching your brother go down for rape sounds like a difficult task, right? Try being the girl in the witness stand, the victim.' 

Most people ignore Kat Price and go straight for her perfect, confident and attractive older brother, Finn. The day that Finn goes down for rape, Kat's in the spotlight, Kat's the one with the answers. She also just wants to be left alone, remain invisible and live happily with her mum and her horse without the gossip and drama. So, what happens when a brooding boy with beautiful eyes and a love for horses is thrown into the mix? Eli is the proud new owner of Finn's old mare, Tempest. He doesn't know about Kat's haunting past or why she's so skittish. All he knows is that he's desperate to help. 

Headstrong and broken is how Eli describes Kat when he first see's her. But is her past too shattered and her heart too destroyed for Eli to fix?

overrheard overrheard May 12, 2016 06:46PM
I really loved the way you started it all and yeah im excited for whats coming uo next lets see
sillehsarah sillehsarah Mar 25, 2016 03:24AM
Am I the only person who notices she bolded a few words in the definitions???
Kitti369 Kitti369 Mar 12, 2016 05:01PM
Oh my god I love the beggening already and I've read what? A few paragraphs?
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Katurdie Katurdie Jun 21, 2016 06:11AM
This is a great start. I'm already attached to this story and am bombarded with so many emotions. I can't wait to continue reading!
wanderlust20 wanderlust20 Aug 13, 2016 09:10PM
hey guys! so ive had a heck of a life growing up and i decided to voice it now. the story is on my page, feel free to check it/vote/follow. thank you