She's Broken

She's Broken

37 Part Story 6.3M Reads 134K Votes
Kate By Lilohorse Completed

'Watching your brother go down for rape sounds like a difficult task, right? Try being the girl in the witness stand, the victim.' 
    
    Most people ignore Kat Price and go straight for her perfect, confident and attractive older brother, Finn. The day that Finn goes down for rape, Kat's in the spotlight, Kat's the one with the answers. She also just wants to be left alone, remain invisible and live happily with her mum and her horse without the gossip and drama. So, what happens when a brooding boy with beautiful eyes and a love for horses is thrown into the mix? Eli is the proud new owner of Finn's old mare, Tempest. He doesn't know about Kat's haunting past or why she's so skittish. All he knows is that he's desperate to help. 
    
    Headstrong and broken is how Eli describes Kat when he first see's her. But is her past too shattered and her heart too destroyed for Eli to fix?

QueenNeia76 QueenNeia76 Jan 11, 2016 01:00AM
That was really emotional and I like the way the main character shows that dictionaries can't define everything
jhfj2001 jhfj2001 Jan 05, 2016 01:22AM
And I shall now break the chain of 666 comments, you all can thank me later ;)
00Depressed00 00Depressed00 Dec 11, 2015 02:01PM
Beautiful.
                                    How interesting, foreshadowing, yet a certain vagueness that pulls you deeper.
I love what you did with the title of the book. How you colored the letters to make them say that he's ok, but she's broken
jas_20 jas_20 Nov 25, 2015 08:54PM
This is sooo deep. I love it already. Although, I now it's most likely going to cause all of us a heartache, but thats what all good books do don't they?
meganbtw meganbtw Nov 08, 2015 07:46PM
I was attacked by a dog when I was 7 and I have a scar on my forehead and everybody jokes that I'm a wizard...😆😂