Author: @HavenStiel
Reviewer: theendofeverything03
I'm sorry for the late review.
The cover of the book is amazing! It fits the story perfectly. The title is also great. Now, moving on to the plot, the story is amazingly imagined. Thinking a detective story is very hard especially because you have to think of the murders and the making the witnesses.
I love the concept of 'Tooth Fairy' he is a well imagined murderer. The character development of Danielle is also very well thought. She has an amazing character. Also, I love how you have showed the family being detectives and brilliant.
Two important things that I would point out is, the chapters are way too long. The writer can try shortening it up a bit, so the reader gets even more intrigued. Also, not every character is introduced well. The reader has to figure out who Mike, Damien and Jessica is. The writer can try telling them each and every character with a back story.
There were some punctuation and grammar which can be easily overlooked. Overall, this book was amazing.
I would rate it a 5 on 5.