ooookay. i hate making these, but i'm afraid i've got to.
let's start with the basics here ;
DO NOT STEAL MY STORIES.
i honestly don't know what's so hard about that – just don't steal it. i don't care if you write something similar to it, truly, but don't just change the characters and a couple pieces of dialogue and claim it as yours. it's so aggravating to see someone be like "oH MY GOSH SOMEONE STOLE MY STORY IDEA?1!3!2?"
yeah, no. you stole it, copied and pasted it, and changed a couple things from my story. just stop. it's so annoying and i'm sure you wouldn't want someone stealing your stuff.