What if I ain't no violinist?

By rin_rin40

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A collection of one-shot and short stories of parallel worlds about Twoset Violinists Brett and Eddy. What if... More

2. Twoset Chemistry
4. Twoset Hotline
8. Twoset Football Talent
9. Twoset Football Talent II
10. Twoset Football Talent III
11. Twoset Snowboarders
12. Twoset Snowboarders II
14. Author's note 20210109
15. Twoset Science
19. Twoset First Aiders
20. Twoset First Aiders II
21. Twoset Anthropologists
22. Twoset Anthropologists II
23. Twoset Mash-up Reunion!
24. Twoset Tutoring
27. Twoset Ultimate Questions
28. Twoset Blind Dating Musicians: Edwina Edition
29. Twoset Fan Girls
30. Twoset Skaters
31. Twoset Skaters II
1. Twoset MMA
32. Twoset MMA II
36. Swipe top right, swipe bottom right
6. Twoset Daddy
17. Twoset Daddy II
43. Twoset Daddy III
49. Twoset Accountants
50. Twoset Accountants II
54. Author's Note - the mathematics of fanfic
52. Twoset Geologists
53. Twoset Geologists II
55. Twoset Geologists III
33. Twoset Sky-divers
35. Twoset Sky-divers II
61. Twoset Twins
62. Twoset Twins II
63. Twoset Boyband
64. Twoset Boyband II
65. Twoset Boyband III
51. Twoset Dancers
66. Twoset Clairvoyants
67. Twoset Clairvoyants II
68. Twoset Fortune Teller
70. Twoset Fortune Teller II
69. Twoset Wizard
72. Twoset Wizard II
39. Twoset Pest Controllers
47. Twoset Pest Controllers II
76. Twoset Pest Controllers III
77. Twoset Teaser
82. You can see me?
83. Twoset Peas
88. Twoset Peas II
89. Twoset Peas III
92. Twoset Handbells
96. Twoset Cleaner
97. Twoset Cleaner II
99. Twoset Cleaner III
38. Twoset Singers
40. Twoset Singers II
46. Twoset Singers III
93. Twoset Singers IV
100. Twoset Singers V
105. Twoset Bartender
95. Twoset Window Cleaner
98. Twoset Window Cleaner II
106. Twoset Window Cleaner III
107. Twoset Window Cleaner IV
26. Twoset Grapefruit Boys
34. Twoset Grapefruit Boys II
48. Twoset Grapefruit Boys III
80. Twoset Grapefruit Boys IV
109. Twoset Grapefruit Boys V
108. Twoset Travellers
110. Twoset Travellers II
111. Twoset Travellers III
112. The Haircuts by Butcher
18. Twoset Firefighters
58. Twoset Zookeeper
75. Twoset Zookeeper II
94. Twoset Zookeeper III
115. Twoset Zookeeper IV
116. Twoset Firefighters II & Zookeeper V Mashup
117. Twoset Firefighters III/Zookeeper VI Mashup II
118. Twoset Firefighters IV/Zookeeper VII Mashup III
119. Twoset Firefighters V/Zookeeper VIII Mashup IV
41. Twoset Competitors
42. Twoset Competitors II
44. Twoset Competitors III
120. Twoset Firefighters VI / Competitors IV Mashup
121. Twoset Firefighters VII / Competitors V Mashup II
122. Twoset Firefighters VIII / Competitors VI Mashup III
123. Twoset Firefighters IX / Competitors VII Mashup IV
124. Twoset Firefighters X / Competitors VIII Mashup V
125. Twoset Firefighters XI / Competitors IX Mashup VI
126. Twoset Firefighters XII / Competitors X Mashup VII
56. Twoset Daycare
57. Twoset Daycare II
59. Twoset Daycare III
60. Twoset Daycare IV
127. Twoset Pre-school
129. Twoset Pre-school II
130. Twoset Pre-school III
86. Twoset Dentist
131. Twoset Dentist II
132. Twoset Doctor and IT security engineer
133. Twoset Doctor and IT security engineer II
138. Twoset Kidneys
139. Twoset Oompa-Loompas (writing challenge)
140. Twoset Tweeter
142. Twoset Gen β
143. Twoset Gen β II
144. Twoset Gen β III
145. Twoset Gen β IV
3. Twoset Teachers
5. Twoset Teachers II
13. Twoset Teachers III
16. Twoset Teachers IV (Viola Vexation 1)
25. Twoset Teachers V (Viola Vexation 2)
37. Twoset Teachers VI
45. Twoset Teachers VII
85. Twoset Teachers VIII (Luscious Lashes 1)
91. Twoset Teachers IX (Luscious Lashes 2)
102. Twoset Teachers X (Paparazzi 1)
103. Twoset Teachers XI (Paparazzi 2)
104. Twoset Teachers XII
128. Twoset Teachers XIII (special episode - writing challenge)
141. Twoset Teachers XIV
148. Twoset Teachers XV
149. Twoset Removalists
150. Twoset Timetravellers
151. Twoset Inventor
154. Twoset Timetravellers II
7. Twoset Manga-ka
79. Twoset Manga-ka II
81. Twoset Manga-ka III
84. Twoset Manga-ka IV
101. Twoset Manga-ka V
152. Twoset Manga-ka VI
153. Twoset Manga-ka VII
156. Twoset Manga-ka VIII
157. Twoset Vampire
166. Twoset Hairdresser
167. Twoset Gen α
168. Twoset Artist
169. Twoset Bedtime Story
170. Twoset Bedtime Story II
171. Twoset Secrets
158. Twoset La Mort
159. Twoset Guardian
160. La Mort meets Guardian
161. La Mort meets Guardian II
162. La Mort meets Guardian III
163. La Mort meets Guardian IV
164. La Mort meets Guardian V
172. La Mort meets Guardian VI
179. The 4 levels of Twoset Violin-chan
73. Twoset Veterinarian
74. Twoset Veterinarian II
78. Twoset Veterinarian III
90. Twoset Veterinarian IV
134. Twoset Veterinarian V (Blink for benevolence 1)
135. Twoset Veterinarian VI (Blink for benevolence 2)
136. Twoset Veterinarian VII (Blink for benevolence 3)
137. Twoset Veterinarian VIII (Blink for benevolence 4)
146. Twoset Veterinarian IX (In the name of science 1)
147. Twoset Veterinarian X (In the name of science 2)
173. Twoset Veterinarian XI (Liszt's curse 1)
174. Twoset Veterinarian XII (Liszt's curse 2)
175. Twoset Veterinarian XIII (Liszt's curse 3)
176. Twoset Veterinarian XIV (Liszt's curse 4)
177. Twoset Veterinarian XV (Liszt's curse 5)
178. Twoset Veterinarian XVI (Liszt's curse 6)
180. Twoset Veterinarian XVII
182. The art class - injured
183. The art class II - portrait
184. Twoset Devil
185. Twoset Diary (Eddy's)
189. Twoset Sleeptalkers
190. Twoset Barista
191. Twoset Barista II
192. Twoset Barista III
193. Twoset Traceurs
194. Twoset Traceurs II
195. Twoset Traceurs III
196. Twoset Detectives
197. Twoset Detectives II
155. Twoset Psychic
186. Twoset Psychic II
187. Twoset Psychic III
188. Twoset Psychic IV
198. Twoset Psychic V
87. Twoset Searchers
113. Twoset Searcher II
114. Twoset Searcher III
165. Twoset Searcher IV
181. Twoset Searchers V
199. Twoset Searchers VI
200. Twoset Searchers VII

71. Twoset Dancers II

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By rin_rin40

A/N: This is a sequel to Twoset Dancers (Chapter 51) of this book.


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The next item on the workshop program was for each group of dancers to come up with thier own choreography and teach the other 2 groups how to dance their style and genre of dance. Each group had 30 minutes to put together their dance routine.

When the alarm set by John the facilitator went off after 30 minutes, he asked all the dancers to sit on one side of the dance hall and asked each dance style group to present their choreography to the rest of the dancers.

The classical ballet team, with Eddy as their group leader taking the centre, showcased their beautiful synchronisation, graceful movements, beautiful lines from head to toe and expressions by their hands.

The freaky movements of the hip-hop team, delivered by Brett and the other members of their group taking the centre in turns for their solos, were very entertaining, though Eddy thought he would never be able to learn to move like that. It was as if Brett and his team members were able to command their body parts to individually move in various directions against any sort of flow. For a ballet dancer, such a way of moving was terribly confusing.

The contemporary team also showed beautiful contrast between their strength and softness with their movements. The movements looked more "familiar" to Eddy compared to hip-hop, yet it had a much more "raw" and "edgy" power to it.

"Okay, so now I would like you all to make a group of 3, 1 from each genre so that you can teach each other your dance group's routine. Let's do the ballet routine first, we'll have a performance by each dance style group in 30 minutes."

Eddy from ballet, Brett from hip-hop and a girl who introduced herself as Brettany was a contemporary dancer who got together in a group.

"Hi, I'm Eddy. Brettany is it? Nice to meet you. This is Brett. Okay, so our ballet choreography starts from arms in 2nd position... Brett, we're starting with arms opened wide, parallel to the floor."

Brett found the movements were relatively straight forward but he felt like there was not a shred of grace in his movements. When dancing in his own genre, there'd be numerous moments when he would add some graceful movements as an embellishment – but these were for only for a few beats to emphasise the next "sick" movement that would follow just before where the "drop" of the music occurred and thus such poses were never "held" for a long duration of time. So comparing himself with Eddy in the studio mirror, Brett could not believe they were dancing the same routine.

"Eddy... why do I look like a cockroach scuttling across the floor, rather than someone dancing ballet ?"

Eddy looked absolutely mortified with Brett's question.

"Aaaagh, Brett, please don't say that!!"

Brett raised an eyebrow.

"Why..??"

"I just can't stand... those insects. Anyway, look, we're bound to look different when we dance simply because you're not a ballet dancer.. But that's okay, I saw your dance routine and it looked amazing. I'm scared of learning it."

"Hmm"

"Okay, so some tips. I do think you can make your movements bigger with larger steps, plus, show me your arms in 2nd position again? Yeah, spread out like that. Can you make them wider? Can you push out your chest as you hold your arms out so that your arms look longer? "

"Um...like this ??"

Brett popped out his chest and jerked his shoulders backwards which allowed an arm extension that made Eddy's eyes almost water.

"What the frick..!?!?  What did you just do !?!?"

"I just popped my chest and locked my shoulders, I don't usually leave it like this but I think this is kinda close to what you ballet dancers do to make your arms look longer."

"Yeah... but hang on, wait, what do you mean by you don't leave them out?"

"Well, we pop it in and out or lock it to the beat when we dance."

Brett demonstrated and Eddy cringed.

"Okay.. so let's just keep them popped? locked? out when you expand your arms, they look really good when you give them length like that. And straighter posture... more.. your best, Brett. Yep, the neck kept long.. good. And hands.. no fists, let's keep the hands open, not like the paper in scissors-paper-rock but fingers closer, almost together... not quite a karate chop, no we don't want a claw either..focus on keeping your middle fingers straight, that should take care of the rest. You should also take larger and fewer steps when you move around the stage so that we are all covering the same ground with the same number of steps... no Brett, we don't ever improv our own number of steps in ballet..!! We gotta keep in sync when the 3 of us dance together. I'll take slightly smaller steps to keep it in sync better. Now, can you point your toes ..and when you take steps we're gonna land on your toes first... what's wrong Brett? Oh sh*t, are you cramping up !?!?!?"

Eddy had very little to say to Brettany as her early dance training was ballet. She went over the choreography once with Brett and Eddy and spent most of the time practising on her own and had 1 final check by Eddy before John's alarm went off.

Brett was flustered, brain-fried and had cramps in both feet.

When the 4 contemporary dancers showed their classical ballet routine in front of the rest of the dancers, Brett was immediately able to see the synchronisation that Eddy was emphasising.

"Excuse me, sorry, John, may the B-boys have a 10-second meeting before we start ?"

"Again Brett? I'm intrigued as to what you can achieve in 10 seconds this time. Of course. "

Just as before, Brett only huddled up with the other B-boys for 10 seconds before he declared they were ready.

And the B-boys' ballet routine began.

So there wasn't a whole lot of "grace" – not when B-boys aren't even trained to point their toes –suddenly being told to dance with pointed toes resulted in Brett keeling over with continuous cramps so Eddy just gave up.

However, Eddy noticed Brett must have taught the rest of the B-boys how to pop and lock their shoulders and arms as they all showed fabulous arm extensions. He was impressed with the adaptability of the B-boys.




It was the last group work session when the 3 groups – classically trained, contemporary and hip-hop dancers were all mixed together to try out the hip-hop routine. Eddy was very nervous as he knew he would look like a complete klutz. He suspected his years and years of classical training wasn't going t help him at all for hip hop.

Boy, was he right.

Brett called out.

"Guys.. let's take a quick water break for a second.."

He stepped over to his phone and killed the music, then stepped over to Eddy for a discreet chat.

"Dude, do you even listen to the lyrics?"

Eddy with sweat dripping down his face more from nerves than tiredness looked puzzled.

"Brett, I don't normally dance to songs with lyrics... so no.. who listens to lyrics?"

Brett face palmed himself.

"Eddy, if you don't listen to the lyrics, how would you understand how the tempo changes? Like if you're expressing a heartbeat, as it goes fast or slow..."

"How could a heartbeat change tempo?"

Brett pulls back his fist and pretended to take a swing at Eddy.

Eddy screamed.

"Oh my f*cking god!!!!!"

Brett flashed a cheeky grin.

"Is that heart of yours beating faster now? That's how. If you listen to the lyrics and it tells you the heartbeat is fastening, you instinctively know that the choreography goes at double speed."

"Oh my god."

"You looked like you were trying to learn all the choreography in your head."

"...um.. Yes, cos that's what we normally do..!"

Brett grinned again.

"I mean don't get me wrong, we do learn the choreo. But a lot of it is based on the lyrics and parts of it can be quite intuitive in hip-hop."

"Oh geez, nothing feels intuitive when I dance your style, Brett."

Brett burst out laughing as he threw his head back.

"Says the classical dancer with the most graceful moves..."

"Brett, I was meant to ask you, the bit when you guys do your solos..."

"Yes..?"

"I thought your choreo looked different from when you first showed us...."

"Yeah, cos it's an improv solo."

'WHAT!?!?!??!"

Eddy recoiled in horror.

Brett raised an eyebrow as if to say "What's the big deal?"

"... I take it you don't do those in ballet?"

"Noooooooooooooooooooo!!!"

Eddy groaned.

"...No Brett, not in a million years. And I'm just gonna look like a deer in headlights when I stand in the centre of the stage.."

Brett smirked.

"But it's the best part of the routine, Eddy - to take centre stage and do sick stuff."

"....Brett, you're not helping."

"Well... at least deers are cuter than cockroaches."

"Brett, you're really not helping.  Oh my god. I am so dead."




A/N: That concludes the duology of Twoset Dancers, thank you for reading and I hope you enjoyed the story...!

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