Immortals Chapter 11 - His Top Secret Weakness

1.3K 74 24
                                    

They see me rollin'! duh duh duh...something something something~! I don't know the words to this song anymoah!

No, but seriously, I am on a literal (lol, literal) roll! I have never written so many chapters in such a short space of time before. Update, update, update!

My friends asked my why I'm updating this so much, but it's simply because I'm really enjoying writing it. I love this fanfic! I think it's one of my best grammatically and the most descriptive of my fanfics. This, and Spectral Illusions, I think, are my best, but I love the storylines of all mah fanfics!

Technically, if I changed the names of Sasuke, Naruto, Ino, Sakura, Tenten, Hinata, the Uchiha clan and whatnot, it wouldn't even be a fanfic. This whole storyline is my work, so technically, if I just changed the names, this could be an original story. It's not happening, though, so, it's staying as a fanfic.

Alright, enough! Let the poor people enjoy the chapter. This one's a little longer than usual, so enjoy!

______

The pain was incredible. Richard was a lot more violent than Sasuke had been, and Ayame couldn't help but try, at least, to fight back. She tried everything; kicking, elbowing, punching, but it was useless. His grip on her was relentless.

It finally stopped when Richard let out a cry out pain, and his grip on her loosened. She took the opportunity to shove him away, though she wasn't strong enough to completely break free. He'd obviously took more blood than what was healthy, and her vision was already blurry.

Richard was yanked away quite violently, thrown into the far wall. Ayame didn't even get to see her saviour's face before her knees gave out and she collapsed to the ground.

Immortals (Naruto fanfic, Modern AU)Where stories live. Discover now