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Prompt: She comes across her ex on Valentine's Day. What happens next?

Couple: Rudra x Bhavya

Couple: Rudra x Bhavya

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Meeting My Ex

Rudra and Bhavya is entering a party hand in hand.Bhavya feeling nervous and Rudy as always cool.Bhavya is adjusting her dress

Rudra:Offo Bhavya stop doing it,its perfect
B:Rudy I feel very awkward in this dress
Ru:Haan haan u will feel awkward only, first time ladki jo lag rahe ho, varna always in shirt pants
Bhavya’s mouth goes O and beat Rudy
B:Shut up
Ru:Whats your problem I told na you are looking stunning,now u look like girlfriend of a super model
B rolls her eyes
Ru:Listen
B:Hmmm
Ru:I have got something for u
B wide eye:One more gift
Ru smiles and forwards a gift box.Bhavya opens and see a diamond bracelet
B:Diamond bracelet?
Rudra smiles and nods
B:Whats the need Rudy
Rudy’s  smile vanish:What do u mean by what is the need.Arre you are my valentine
B:Haan toh u have gifted this dress na,vo bhi very costly and now this too,try to save money
Ru in anger: Come on bhavya u r hone wale bahu of oberoi and girlfriend of a supermodel stop being harpy, in fact u three O bahus na
B:Its not being harpy its just saving money
Ru:So u will not wear it
B:Rudy try to understand I don’t put
Ru in anger:U know what is the problem of u three O bahus, u have got such a loving partners so u are doing nakhre, arre other girls love to get such gifts and u r getting it na so showing nakhre,teek hein mat pehno
Rudra go in anger.
B:Rudy just listen
Rudra goes,Bhavya follows him.Bhavya hit with someone
B:I m so sorr
B look wide eye seeing the person and little tensed
B:Manish
The man looks and see Bhavya
Manish:Bhavya,Kaise ho tum long time huuh
Manish goes to hug bhavya but bhavya moves back.Manish rolls his eyes
Manish: U have not changed
Bhavya looks down
Manish:By the way what are u doing here,I dint know that in this party person with relationship status single also is allowed, did u come for the protection of someone?
B looks at Manish
M:Ohh so u came to search for a partner, may I help u
Rudra comes to Bhavya still in anger
Ru:Any problem
Rudra looks at Manish and Bhavya,
B: (oh my God what will happen if Rudy know about)
Ru:Who is this
B:Vo he is he is Manish my friend
B looks at Manish
M:Now we are friends but there was a time when we were more than friends right darling
Bhavya look wide eye at Manish.Rudra looks at Bhavya and Manish.B gulps.Rudy looks at Bhavya
Ru:Baat karke aa jaao
Ru goes
B:Rudy vo
B looks at M
B:What is your problem? What do u want,u left me saying u got someone better than me I dint say anything and now what are u trying to prove
M:Prove? I was just saying everything clearly na,making easy for u,what can I do if he take it seriously.vaise you said that day you will get someone better than me, is he the one? Better than me really, u know my position now,I am manager of a top company. Vaise tumhari boyfriend karta kya hein huh dekhne mein  toh teek taak hi lagta hein. Is he also an ACP like you,25k Rs per month.
A girl comes to Manish:Baby
M:Yes darling
The girl come and stand beside Manish
M:This is Romi my fiancée,she is daughter of the MD where I am working.You know his father knows Commisioner very well, if u need any help for promotion and all I can help you
Bhavya looks at Romi.Bhavya looks and see Rudy taking drinks from the counter
B:Excuse me
B goes to Rudy.Manish smirks
Romi:Who is that baby
M:Baby vahi hein bhavya mere ex actually timepass huh u know na I like tough games toh bas ek bet jeetne keliye
Romi:Ohh I was also thinking what happened to your choice
Bhavya goes to Rudy
B:Rudy
Ru:Ohh finished talking huh
B sad: Please don’t misunderstand me I
Ru: Whats their to misunderstand, everything was clear na
B:I am sorry Rudy please
Ru:Good ,u should be
B:I knw I did a mistake but it was not intentional I felt awkward
Ru:Awkward? Really
B looks at Rudy and looks down
Ru: You are very strange,whats awkward to wear a bracelet
B:Its just (realising)bracelet?
Ru: You said u feel awkward wearing this dress ok I understand but whats there in a bracelet bhavya. How could u deny the gift of your valentine vo bhi on valentine’s day
B: You you are angry with me for this
Ru:Then what
B:I thot u are upset coz my ex
Ru:ex? Ohh yeahh ex. I am so sorry
B: Sorry?
Ru:I was so angry at you that I dint talk to him well na, where is he
B:You are alright na I mean u don’t have a problem
Ru: I have a problem
B looks at Rudy
Ru: But it will vanish when u wear this
Ru smiles and make her wear the bracelet.
Manish sees it
M:You go meet your friends I wil just come after some masti
Romi goes.
B: I wanted to say about
Manish comes: Did I disturb something
Rudy and Bhavya looks at M
Ru:no no we were just
M forward his hands
M:Manish
Rudy too shake hands: Rudra
M:What is this bhavya, y so silent, teek se introduce toh karvao apne ex ko
Rudy looks at Bhavya.Bhavya looks down awkward
M:Chalo chodo,I will take the first step,how about having drink and starters with me
B:No
M:Why,afraid or what huh
Ru looks at M
Ru:You go we will join
B looks at Ru.M goes
Ru: Arre come on Bhavya lets go, your ex is very eager na
B:Rudy vo
Ru:Lets have some fun baby
Rudy winks at Bhavya
Rudra grabs Bhavya
Ru:Chalo chalo
Ru:Where is your valentine Manish
M proudly.
M:She must be busy with friends, you know her friend circle is very large very high class people
Ru: Ohhhh kamaal hein I mean your valentine isolated you on valentine’s day.chalo acha hein we met u varna u will be alone na,hein na bhavya
M’s smile vanish
B looks at Ru.Ru winks at B and pull the chair for bhavya
Ru:Sit sit
M nods.B sits beside Rudy.M opposite.
M: Vaise bhavya u are still in the quarters right that two room flat
B nods.
M:Whats the plan,after marriage also u will be settling there
Ru:Arre you don’t know? After marriage wife stays in husband’s home means my home
M:Ofcourse,I hope your home will be having atleast 4 rooms
Ru:Yeah yeah my home has more than four rooms
Rudy smiles
M:Good, my home has 8 rooms.
Ru:Wow good
M:Yeahh,vaise who all are there in your family?
Ru:My family,dadi, mom dad my two brothers,babhis,choti maa chote papa
M:Ohh such a big family
Ru:Yeahh
M:How are you adjusting
Ru:If we are staying with love adjustment is not required na right bhavya
B nods
M:Being orphan
Ru:No manish bhavya was an orphan ab she has my family
Ru keeps hand on her hand and smile.M looks at both
M:Vaise what you do Rudra
Ru:Ohh I m a model
Manish wide eye:huh?model?
Ru:yeah model,doing ads
The waiter comes.
Waiter:Yes sir
Rudy:Two pineapple juice and what will u have Manish
M:Coke
The waiter nods and go.
M:Why two pineapple juice bhavya
B looks at M.Rudy frowns
M:I mean we used to drink from same glass na,two straw one pineapple juice,kyun
B look wide eye at M
Rudy:Really
Bhavya looks at Rudy.Manish smirks
Ru: Bhavya . this is what I like in you
Ru smiles and wrap his hand around her shoulder.Bhavya wide eye look at Rudy.M frowns
Ru:My girl friend na very adjusting
M:Huh
Ru:Ab dekho na she knows you cant afford two glass of juice so she adjusted with one glass,ab she know na I can afford her one full glass of juice and I am not a miser too so we order two pineapple juice, right baby
B controls her laughter.Ru smiles at Manish.Manish gets angry and clench his fist. The waiter comes with the drinks.
Ru:Our order has come
They three take the drinks
M:Cheers
Rudy too raise his drink.
M:Vaise how u adjust with someone like bhavya,so unromantic and her first love is her job.She dont even say I love you. But my fiancée is so romantic, always message me I love you, call me every night,she is expressive
Bhavya look down
Ru: We don’t need words to express true love.small small actions do more than words can do. You know action speak louder than words. Ab dekho na bhavya is sitting beside me on Valentine’s day  proving that I m important to her than her friends
Rudy shrug his shoulders .Bhavya looks at Rudy in admiration. Manish glares at Rudy
Rudy sees Om and Gauri coming
Ru:O
Rudy waves hand.Om sees Rudy and they come to them
Ru:Why so late yaar
Rudy looks at Gauri.Gauri beats Om.
G: See,Don’t look at me Rudy bhaiya,I was ready on time,he came late from the art exhibition and upar se took one hour to do his hair
O fold his hand
O: Acha meri maa sorry, Vo I got another exhibition so was in a small meeting
G makes faces
G: Bhavya
Gauri hugs Bhavya
G:You look very pretty hein na omkaraji
O:Yeahh like a princess of fairy tales
Ru rolls his eyes
Ru:Come on O,princess and all is old fashion,say she is hot sexy
Om hits Rudy’s head
Om:Shameless
Om sees Manish and frowns. Om looks at Rudy.Gauri too looks at Manish and bhavya
Ru:Ohh sorry Manish I forgot, This is Omkara my brother and this is his wife Gauri
Ru:O this is Manish
M forward his hands.Om shake hands
M:I am bhavya’s ex
Om raise eyebrow at Manish and look at Bhavya.Bhavya looks down embarrassed and Gauri glare at Manish.Om looks at Rudy,Rudy winks at Om.Om nods
O:Nice to meet you Manish
Om hugs Manish.B look wide eye.G frowns.Rudy bite his lips to hide his laugh
O:Thank u so much
M:Ji
O: Haan if u haven’t left Bhavya then how will my crazy brother get someone like Bhavya , so Thanks a lot, hein na gauri
G frowns:Haan haan
M: (The whole family is ajeeb yaar , huh one is model and the other one is artist. Anyway I am better than them.huh)
Ru:Where is bhaiya O
O:He will come now, Babhi came now only after meeting sahil so
Ru:Hmmm
M:Wow kamaal hein bhavya,you have got pass for the whole family ,how did u manage to get huh
Om Gauri frowns and looks at Bhavya and Rudy.
Ru:Vo kya hein na
Announcment: Ladies and gentleman , the guest of honour has reached the venue,
M: Ohhh my boss has reached the venue
B:Boss?
M:Yeah my boss is the guest of honour of the party huh I told na I m the manager of a top company, he is the owner of the company
Ru:Ohh really,wow
M:Yeahh
M says proudly
Announcement: Ladies and gentleman please welcome Shivaay Singh Oberoi and his wife Anika Singh Oberoi
M:Arre clap your hands na
They four clap their hands.Shivaay receives the bouquet and see Rudy and Om.Shivaay and Anika walks to them with Mishra
Manish: See they are coming to see me,you see the man walking beside them that’s my fiancée’s father
O:Ohhh
Manish: Hmmm u also stand here I will introduce him to you all
Ru:Dats so kind of u, hein na bhabhi
G:Haan very kind
Shivaay comes,Manish forward his hand but Shivaay ignores it and hug Bhavya.Manish look shocked
Shi: Long time bhavya, how many times I have told u to come home
Bhavya smiles.Anika tap Shivaay’s shoulder
A:She comes every week ok, its not her fault that u come at midnight from office,now she cant wait till midnight for u na, huh aaye bade baat karne
Shi:You don’t interfere ok I m talking to my sister
Manish:Sister?
Shivaay Anika turns and see Manish
Mishra: Arre beta what are u doing here with them
Manish frowns at Mishra
Rudy: Manish this is my bade bhaiya,Shivaay Singh Oberoi
Manish gulps.Rudy smiles and raise his eyebrow.
O:Shivaay this is Manish
Shivaay nods and forward his hands
Mishra: Sir this is my daughter’s fiancée,
Shivaay:Ohh I see
M:He hello sir
Mishra:Arre  Manish beta these are brothers of Shivaay Sir, this is Omkara, bahut hi bada artist hein,a self made millionare. This is Omkara’s wife Gauri ji,she is a famous designer,u always say na Rikara brand,she is the owner
Manish look wide eye at Om,Om smiles and nods.Gauri fold her hands.
Mishra:This is the younger oberoi,Rudra.He is a super model and he is also a self made billionare and this is his fiancé Bhavya ,ACP hein.
Rudy smiles and wrap his hand around bhavya
G:Arre Manishji u dint say the other thing to him
Manish look wide eye at G and nods no
Shi:What other thing
Manish looks down
Ru:Ohh may be he is shy I will say bhaiya,he is bhavya’s ex
Mishra look wide eye at Manish
Mishra: Ex?
O:Haan Mishraji,u dint know it
Mishra glare at Manish,Manish looks down in fear
Shivaay:Anyways u all come to stage,we six are the special guests remember
Rikara ,Shivika and Mishra goes,Rudy turns to go but Bhavya hold his hand.
B: Dekha ,the person better than u, infact I will say lakh times better than u, I am not saying this coz he is richer and famous than u. He is such an understanding person. The way you behaved today deserves severe beating from him, and this muscles are not for show off okay,he very well know to do this but he dint do, you know y coz he consider my respect as his own respect.He is better because he will be beside me for facing every problems in my life. He is better coz he had given me a lovely family who support me through my thick and thin, better coz he is such a caring partner and loves me very much.Money and position is not everything Manish.
B turns to go ,stops and turns back
B:By the way, if u need any help for promotion and all I can help you
B smirks and walks
Ru:Wow that was amazing
B:Rudy I wanted to say about Manish
Ru:No bhavya I don’t want to know,I can assume what kind of a boyfriend was he so let it be. By the way how could u say that I could beat him without asking me, if he would have come for fight what would have I done
B:Arre don’t worry he don’t know na u r a darpok.aur mein hoon na
Ru:Acha ji
B smile
B: I love you Rudy, and I have a gift for u
Ru: Really wow
Rudy forward his hands,B smiles goes near Rudy and kiss on his cheek. Rudy looks down shy,Bhavya smiles
B:Haaw so cute, happy valentines day
Bhavya hugs Rudy.

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