Hey ya'll!!!I was speaking to the amazing @ZaraAbabil and decided to continue my story as I'd but will list here all the errors that will be encountered if you wish to read it as is and once I am finished I will either go through it and fix it myself or have someone else do it for me (if I can find a willing soul!!)
That being said here's the list of mistakes you may find:
Plot holes
Spelling errors (a ton)
Random nonsense
Historical data errors (I know nothing about historical small details)
Scene jumps
Foggy backgrounds of main characters and events (I'll try to put in the information that people point out in the coming chapter is I can fit it in!)
Extremely long paragraphs with awkward breaks
I think that's all I can think of! I'm sorry ahead of time!
YOU ARE READING
Reliance Mxb Completed, Unedited
FantasyI was dying. And I didn't care...To be honest I was relived. No more pain... No more awkward stares from those around me. No more whispers about the broken boy from the orphanage with the horrid scars on his back and across the right side of his fa...
