Parallel (A Sci-Fi Virtual Gamer's Story.)

Parallel (A Sci-Fi Virtual Gamer's Story.)

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Renoe Kisaragi By Renoe_K Completed

When the discovery of a new power source known simply as the Nesla coils nearly sends the earth into its third world war, two inventions created using the coils as a basis pull the breaks on the war train.  They were the first mobile suits and the first functioning virtual drive. These two inventions largely affected the world in different ways, as they spread in popularity around the globe.  When an organization has a peculiar insight, five minutes retired 17 years old professional virtual gamer Suzuki Mato is forced into two new worlds: one familiar; the other very dangerous where he is forced to keep his personalities parallel or risk death...

DeSmiley DeSmiley Jul 23
That is an intro that words alone can not express, viciously enough, how excited I am to start reading this!
- - Oct 05
Now he waits...
                              Waits for the man on a white horse,
                              Who follows him each of his days, 
                              Just steps behind but never catching him,
                              Never catching him till he tires and lays down, 
                              Then he wraps him in his welcoming arms, 
                              The last embrace the man will ever know.
Lol doesn't it inspire confidence when you get so many comments on the first paragraph 😂
This is such a good introduction, it's helping me come up with ideas to improve a story that I'm writing so thank you to the author for helping my writers block
And don't you love getting comments on something a year later?😂😂😂
redvarianced redvarianced 6 days ago
Seems interesting. The way you write it. hope the story is better than the writing