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Not Going Back

Not Going Back

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Lily evans By Ginny1602 Updated Sep 25, 2016

Ginnys pov.
Voldemort was dead. I looked at the castle, it was a wreck. I saw Harry leave, and i dindt go after because i figured he needed space. After a while i went ot find him...only to hear a voice. It was Cho Chang and Harry talking. I followed their voices. Only to see him and and her kissing. She was movong her hands over his back. And harry just stayed their. I ran as my heart got crumbled. "Ginny!" He said following me. He ran after me. I forced myself not to look back. "Ginny, it wasnt what it seemed." He said holding my hand. "Well it seemed you were snogging her! So go! After her!." I yelled. He still held on to me. "I dont love her! I love you. Its not what it seemed." He said. "Let go of me Potter!." I said pulling away, runing away. I left him staring at me in the hall. I didnt care about him anymore...he's hurt me too much. I went into the dormitory and started bawling. As heemione entered i whiped my yearw. "What happened Gin?" She asked. "Nothing, can you please take...

lunatoamani lunatoamani Dec 11, 2016
This fanfiction definitely has a good plot, but you may want to work on your paragraphing.