Running Away Won't Help Us Escape

Running Away Won't Help Us Escape

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Niki :F By Fashion_baller23 Updated Sep 11, 2011

The love of his life....could be put in danger.....and because of one man...they shall have to make a dangerous decision...follow Dante and Raven and they embark on the journey of their lives....one that can either make'em or break'em!

AllNaturalDancer2013 AllNaturalDancer2013 Apr 22, 2012
I started reading and got a headache. You need to separte with paragraphs. Try writting in word document first then copy and paste to this sight. It has great potential but you just need to slow down and take it bit by bit.
victoria151 victoria151 Apr 12, 2010
As soon as i started reading i couldnt stop its really good :)
freefallin420 freefallin420 Jan 04, 2010
i liked the bits of humor you threw in there, and i agree with ImagineThat, keep writing i cant wait to read more :)
ImagineThat ImagineThat Dec 21, 2009
Okay, cool! There's the descriptions I wanted. :)  And I thought her reaction was a little more realistic this time.  :)  I think you're doing really well!!!  Keep writing!
                              Going to read more!
                              Yours Randomly,
                              ImagineThat
Fashion_baller23 Fashion_baller23 Dec 13, 2009
@Dukebenjy thnk you sooooo much for the advice i will deff use that to my advantage i appreciated it very much :)