Forbidden Arrow

Forbidden Arrow

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Lisa By ExclusivelyLisa Completed

Carmela had the perfect friends, the perfect school, the dream life. She was the girl everyone wanted to be and the girl every guy wanted to have.

Until, she changed from popular to avoided--forgotten. 

But one crazy night seals her fate as she meets someone, someone that is willing to show her things that she has never seen before, opened her eyes to a new world. Someone that filled the hole made her feel like herself again. But, before she even gets his name she is left with alone with half a phone number. 

When they meet again strange things start happening, mystery notes, creepy voice, eerie walks home, and people threatening her life. Carmela begins to feel unsafe in the neighbourhood she's grown up in. Soon they're both thrown into a life altering situation, which they have rush against the clock to survive. 

Besides, will she ever get that phone number? 

stephi41 stephi41 Dec 04, 2015
This book is the best one yet!
                              I really  love it and think you need to write plenty more!!!!
BlesseeCoeur BlesseeCoeur Jul 27, 2014
something tells me shes gonna go to great lengths for that phone number!
ExclusivelyLisa ExclusivelyLisa Apr 11, 2013
@ourtimeisrunningout
                              
                              Hahah thank you so much!! Yay!! i'm gladd you like it queenoffantasy did it :)
ExclusivelyLisa ExclusivelyLisa Mar 25, 2013
@Rysalix
                              
                              Thank You so much for the comments :) That definitely helps with writing my blurbs!! I appreciate the comments thank you!
ExclusivelyLisa ExclusivelyLisa Mar 24, 2013
@BeingAnonymous_ 
                              
                              Thank you so so much for the criticism :) I'm definitely going to make those changes and thank you for the compliments I'm glad you enjoyed it!!
TheTommoSeries TheTommoSeries Mar 24, 2013
Beautiful sentence structure. I loved the way each and every paragraph pieced together. It was a fantastic opening chapter to the story. keep up the great work x