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I will be reviewing Oc's as I'm getting them, meaning if you send yours first, I will do it first. I'm not very knowledgeable about a lot of fandoms, and it's my first time doing a review, but I will try my best to do rese...
Hello there my little rodents! Firstly I would like to thank Elkisgreat for letting me review their character! Secondly, thank you, reader, for clicking on my book, I really hope you appreciate it and keep on reading my chapters to come! <3
Please excuse the different setup, I could only screenshot their OC's bio. Also, this character will have multiple chapters dedicated to them, as I can only put a max of 20 screenshots in each chapter.
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Don't worry about setting up the exact time of your world, just let it come naturally to you. I really like the idea of your world, steampunk is very interesting to me. Also, everything here looks fine, just nail down the nationality because it can also help decide the "style" of steampunk, because not every country has to stem style fo fashion so in my head not every country has the same style of steampunk, but that's just an idea and you don't have to do that.
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Like I said before, just try and nail down the nationality, and even then nationality doesn't really decide the skin color, that's more so ethnicity. For example, Braxton could have an English Nationality, as if he lives in England, but at the same time, he could have an African ethnicity, if that makes sense. Other than that, I think his appearance is great.
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