A19-74207-1 (Part 2)

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Gabby- I really like their relationship. It's like A "loves" Gabby but doesn't really know how to show it because they just don't know him as well as they know B.

Adopted Father- I actually like this character, he seems like a real character who has motivations and is willing to try again to make his experiments "better" as seen with B

Santiago- Santiago seems like a nice supporting character (sorry if he isn't). One question: Does he help A when they are out in public and A starts to "breakdown"? If so how does he like cover-up the situation?

Saturnina- I like her character, I think it's nice that A has someone else other than B to go to for advice, even if it's not often.

Backstory- I like the backstory, it's a little bland to be completely honest, only because I already knew what was going to happen, but overall the backstory is interesting and I liked it.

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I just want to thank nothing_blah0 so so much again for sending me their character. I had a blast reviewing them and I really hope that my advice can be helpful to you. I also hope that you, all of the readers, and your families stay safe during this quarantine and have good health. Thank you guys, the readers, so so much for reading my book! Subscribe to my profile for more updates on chapter and other books, vote this chapter if you really liked it and if you want, go ahead and drop your on OC in the "Form" chapter, which is the very first one. I will do what I can to review your OC and give you as much honest advice as possible. That's that Space Cats <3

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