- INTERLUDE TWO.

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❝OK, AM I TRIPPING HERE, OR IS ALL THE BLOOD PINK?❞

❝OK, AM I TRIPPING HERE, OR IS ALL THE BLOOD PINK?❞

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OH MY, HERE WE ARE AGAIN. We're twenty chapters into Li'l Science, and we're past two hundred pages. Now, what does that say about me as an author? That I'm desperate to give the Warriors of Hope a happy end? That I'm desperate to cut down all the filler dialogue in Ultra Despair Girls? I suppose the only one with an answer to that is me.

You know how each Warrior of Hope has their own diary? Well, I wanted to show you [Name]'s diary entries. After all, she was the only one who didn't have her entries shown inside her colosseum battle chapter. Therefore, it only feels right to reveal what she chose to write inside the diary given to her, primarily because it doesn't fit in the context of the story that well. In fact, I firmly believe it might break the immersion if I included these, haha.

Without further adieu, I sincerely hope you enjoy [Name] [Surname]'s diary entries.

Dear Diary,

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Best regards,

[Name] [Surname].

Dearer Diary,

Today, I found out that Masaru likes equestrian vaulting.

Now, I had no idea what that meant! Knowing about all this crazy stuff was for Nagisa, not me. He was the one who liked reading Toko Fukawa, after all. I still have to find out what those books are about, just so I can make fun of him for it...

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