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🐾Book 29🐾

Mission 7o2
By kimerotictaehyung

Cover: 3/5

By looking at it, I almost knew how the story would be and I must say, that's not the best for a book cover's attributes.

Having seen many of your edits, I doubt the quality of the cover more. It's not attractive and that's what I can say.

Blurb: 4/5

Not bad but it can be improved. It was partially eye-catching but something felt left out. Maybe, make it a little complex with words.

Chapter 1: 7/10

Umm... I don't know what I am actually supposed to say. Not that it's bad, but very simple to claim attention. And it's not exactly imperfect but yet again, feels incomplete.

Vocabulary/grammar: 7/10

The vocabulary feels bland. Judging the intensity you wanted to create, something feels left out.

Character Development: 9/10

The characters haven't had much changes but I surely liked how they turned out.

Storyline/plot: 18/20

Quite mainstream for a storyline but maybe the use of some extensive vocabulary will help to create a good time.

Enjoyment: 17/20

I wouldn't say I enjoyed it, but also didn't dislike it. It was okay and shows that the author has the potential.

Impression: 18/20

To me, first impression isn't the last. So I hope to see you bloom in your upcoming works

Total=83/100

I hope you didn't find anything too harsh
And I'm sorry for the delay.

Thank you for choosing me as your reviewer.