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🍏Book 28🍏

Tale of The Immortal Love

By Namjoonie7845

Cover: 4/5

It was good but I think it could be better. I didn't get the feel of the book by the cover, i.e, it's not the most relevant cover.

Blurb: 3/5

Just use a little better vocabulary. It's okay but couldn't pull me in the story.

Chapter 1: 8/10

Vocabulary again. That's the only thing I want in the book. Everything is perfect in the chapter and you didn't even have a typo, just the spice feels less because of bland vocabulary.

Vocabulary/grammar: 8/10

I have a keen for books with harder grammar or even a little fancy words. You just lack that, and although that isn't any immediate fault, but often lessens the interest. That's all you need.

And some places need correction.

"Back" has become "bag" and such Autocorrect typo. A proof read is advised.

Character Development: 8/10

Haven't spotted much.

Storyline/plot: 17/20

Not the most unique book but I think it's not that bad as well. It can interest young readers and is perfect for the age group of 14-18.

Enjoyment: 18/20

Just the flavour of the words felt little.

Impression: 18/20

Nice actually.

Total=84/100

I hope you didn't find anything harsh.
Thanks for choosing me as your reviewer
Good Luck!!