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🐾Book 13🐾

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de ASG_JK

de ASG_JK

Dangerous Love
By ARMYaFANofBTS45

Cover: 4/5

The cover is beautiful but irrelevant for the story. I hope you can get a better one. You can contact our in-house designer lippe890 or use some graphic shops.

Blurb: 3/5

This could be better. I did not understand how the story would be by reading the blurb.

Chapter 1: 6/10

The chapter started good, not very uniquely but it wasn't bad. Although by the end of the chapter, I was having a little less interest into continuing.

Vocabulary/grammar: 8/10

Simple. I guess you can add more words in your dictionary.

Character Development: 7/10

I haven't found much development in the characters. I couldn't feel with the characters.

Storyline/plot: 15/20

The storyline isn't very new. I have read such books.

Enjoyment: 15/20

Good.

Impression: 15/20

Good.

Total=73/100

Review:

Please don't write Back to Y/n's POV. Just write Y/n's POV. You can't return to someone's POV.

BTS alone is not a person so you can't write BTS's POV. POV can belong to only one person and not a group of people.

This is not relatable. Jin is Y/n's step mum's friend's son. You don't twist your aunt's hand even if you're trying to protect someone unless the abuser is committing a major harm.

Don't write this.

Don't write such apology chapters in between the book when your chapters are not more than 1000 words. This spoils the fun. You can write your apology at the end of the chapter.

Also, Don't write dialogues in quotation for some chapters while in form of script in others. That's not how stories work. And make the chapters longer.

Thank you for choosing me as your reviewer.

Good Luck!!