This was definitely an interesting way to start. I love your story idea too, it seems so original :)
it's a good introduction, it makes the reader understand the characters the places and the relationships. I didn't get confused at all :) Good job!
I like how u did the intro, it was... different and how u did the point of view... really enjoyed it:) kinda mysterious too! XD lovin it<3
great mystery weaved into this (I love mystery XD) seeing as my chapter Ive asked you to read is 3 pages long I'll move onward to chapter one! :D
I like how you made each point of view like a letter. So far it's very original. Great start!
When I first saw the title it intrigued me and when I read the story I found it very interesting:)
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