This is not just a story about a killer. It's a story about one's love, and the lengths they will go to prove it.
The prologue is good, it gave me the creeps. It reminds me of Variant by Robison Wells, one of my favorite books ever.
Intresting story! Iread a couple of lines and wanted to read more
I haven't even started reading the first chapter and I'm already excited! :)
Really great so far, it has a very interesting introduction that captures you from the first moment.
I hope the book is as good as the introduction.
I like this beginning, very original way to start your story!(:
This was definitely an interesting way to start. I love your story idea too, it seems so original :)
it's a good introduction, it makes the reader understand the characters the places and the relationships. I didn't get confused at all :) Good job!