Yes, here’s an update, I wasn’t feeling well over the week, and My wifi was not being very cooperative , so forgive me. Usually I update every other day.
Okay so from now, August’s narrative speech will be in proper English. His accent WILL remain. It gets so irritating for me, writing the way he speaks other than his interactive dialogue. That is, the part that occurs after speech. For example..."He said before smiling." I’m an English freak; forgive me, I couldn’t take it anymore, trust me it won’t take away from the story. I’ll go back and edit, when this book is over.
Also I asked some of my colleagues at school who read, if they would prefer for the series to have a 3rd book (trilogy) with August and Phoebe and then have a spinoff of Kaitlyn and Johnathan, or have the 3rd book, beginning with Kaitlyn? They said they preferred the first idea. So tell me what you’re thinking. What would you prefer and why?
And lastly, THIS IS A FAN FICTION. THE WAY AUGUST SPEAKS IS JUST TO ADD HIS CHARACTER TO THE BOOK. TO MAKE HIS CHARACTER SEEM SOMEWHAT REAL ALTHOUGH THIS IS COMPLETE FICTION. THE WAY HE SPEAKS ARE’NT TYPOS, OR GRAMMATICAL ERRORS. IT’S HIS ACCENT, GET WITH THE PROGRAM.
Excuse my errors… VOTE AND COMMENT, Ps I already wrote the next chap.
[August ---The following Day]
Knock, Knock! Somebody banged against the door of the bathroom of the tour bus.
“August, we’ll be stopping in 10.” One of my team members said.
“AIght.” I shouted sitting down, looking through my phone. Phoebe, didn’t even message a nigga this morning when she woke up. I didn’t get a chance to call them last night, time I got off, it was already 3 in the morning and I knew they were asleep.
So I was calling now. I dialed the number and put it on speaker phone, just waiting.
“Hey.” She answered.
“Hey? Wazzam with you and ma’ baybeh? Y’all couldn’t call me this mawnin’?”
“I just didn’t get a chance to call you this morning, I’m in class now.”
“I know dat’.” I licked my lips, smiling at her voice. “Kaitlyn aight’?”
“Yes, she’s doing her work now, she was very disappointed. You didn’t call.” She said blandly.
“I know baybeh. First nights, always end real late. Tell ha’ I’m real sorry fa’ me.”
“I waited on your call August, you can’t do that to me.”
“I know baybeh. Real sorry.”
She was silent over the line.
“Phoebe?”
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I N D U L G E N C E (August Alsina) Sequel The Second Chapter
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