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Failed Experiment

Failed Experiment

17.9K Reads 990 Votes 12 Part Story
Cerlina Naomi Ryuuma By CerlinaRyuu Completed

Sans x Frisk

the last experiment no 2398 failed..
they create a monster
is that he the true monster
or somebody else?

That was a really good story line, just the grammar is bothering me, but hey still good
Sans shyly wore the jacket that Frisk handed to him, surprisingly, it fit him quite well. Frisk giggled and rubbed her hand on his skull which made him look up slightly.
The girl continued to slowly step closer to him until she was right in front of the trembling skeleton. The girl was unsure what to do when she bent down to stare at his bleeding ribcage. She touched him, but then she pulled her hands back when she saw him flinch.
Newa_Chan Newa_Chan Dec 18, 2016
I love how everyone is just complaining about how the grammar is now XD
                              But really, English isn't your native language huh? Well, me too, but I was taught english before I learned my natove language at 7
He was still afraid to speak, and just shook his head no. Frisk smiled softly at him, understanding that maybe he would need more time to adjust. With consideration of his pain, she cleansed him of his blood, leaving a slash mark scar on his ribcage that she covered with a white bandage.
Apart from some grammar issues, this story is actually really good