Stranger To Me

Stranger To Me

17.3K Reads 561 Votes 13 Part Story
AnonymouslyAussie By AnonymouslyAussie Updated Jan 09

Imagine being traded to a man who has been said to ruin a women so much in one night that she could never have another. 

Freya didn't have to imagine

She had been.

majoliefee majoliefee Mar 27, 2016
Ok with viviennehyde, it's a little bit confusing two standpoints in the same sentence. But the story's interesting so far...
SwimmerVGirl SwimmerVGirl Aug 10, 2016
Yeah I do like the story so far, but I can't handle the constant switching from 1st and third point of view. This must cause a lot of your readers to stop reading. You really need to fix this if you want to gain readers instead of lose them :)
sarahlebug sarahlebug Nov 01, 2016
I know that was long sorry, also be aware this is my opinion. Feel free to disagree or change anything ive said. Like i said earlier I'm no professional, just an amateur writer 😀 keep up the good work!
- - May 30, 2016
There's a few things that can be tweaked. Like, perhaps giving a more colorful description of everything. And there's some confusing errors
Shiver53 Shiver53 Jan 15
Be consistant in your point of view. You keep switching between 1st and 3rd person, which is rather confusing to follow.
                              Good job though!