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જ Ocultar જ ☾ Jas☽

Author: bangtanrewinds

Reviewer: arcane_apricity

Title - 5/5
-I really loved the title as seeing the character 'Oculto' it's very much accurate and suites the book very much.

Cover - 4/5
-The reason I've cut one mark is because of the font. You could have used a different font cause the current one making it look like a little out of place.

-Other than that the cover is very aesthetic but it could have been somewhat more eye catching.

Blurb - 14/15
-The blurb is very good and informative, I really loved how you explained the meanings in the vocabulary chapter.

-The character introduction is also very interesting and suspenseful.

-I really loved how with each chapter the curiosity level is rising.

Plot / content - 14/15
-The plot of the story is very unique and different from the ones i have read till now and i loved it so much.

-I loved how how the story kept changing like first how first it was in the past and then suddenly it switched to the present which was mind blowing as it didn't looked force it just went with the flow.

Characters - 9/10
-The characters are amazing but i would recommend you to add more characters seeing how the main characters are only Oculto,Yong-Sun, Taehyung & Elle.

Grammar / vocabulary - 17/20
-There were some spelling and grammatical mistakes for which I've cut 3 marks.

Writing style - 29/30
-I literally loved your writing style like it made me feel like I'm Elle, I'm the going through all that.

-Also i really liked how by Elle you portrayed how it's like for authors writing these kinda stories.

-The other thing I loved was how each chapter was full of suspense and curiosity and made me actually wanna read the book, like it was not boring even after not having many dialogues.

-Also I'll recommend you to add some more dialogues in the upcoming seeing how many readers enjoy reading the conversations that occur in between the characters.

-Also I'm looking forward to the upcoming chapters.

Overall enjoyment - 92/100

Have a good day🤍