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    જ GÜLSIYA જ ☾Demonnix☽

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    Book: GÜLSIYA
    Author: RoasterSultana
    Reviewer: Demonnix
    
                            
    
                                Title -> {10/10}Although the title is just a name, it's an interesting one to use! Definitely an eye-catcher!
                            
                              
                              
                                
                                  
                                  
                                
                              
                             
                            
    
                            
    
                              
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    Title -> {10/10}
    Although the title is just a name, it's an interesting one to use! Definitely an eye-catcher!
    Cover -> {15/15}
    I love the cover! It looks very pretty and the darker colours used definitely highlights the aesthetic!
    Story Description -> {5/5}
    I must say, this is the first story I have read that has a mashup including Pirates of the Caribbean! 
    The description was intriguing! I love the dialogue introducing the reader to the story and then the description of where we are and what has been going on! 
    Content -> {49/50} (grammar and punctuation, originality, plot)
    The storyline and plot was A-M-A-Z-I-N-G! I loved every part of the story! The amount of detail in each chapter, the fast pace and the amazing introduction of characters blew me away!
    The only little things that I could spot was writing a paragraph after a dialogue in the same paragraph! If dialogue is by itself, it is more proper to separate the paragraph written to the dialogue (the one line after the dialogue rule).
    The other would be the change of tense from ‘you’ to ‘my’. Please try to keep the tense consistent!
    Writing Skills -> {10/10}
    I am in love with the story! It is so amazing and unique and I also just loooovveeee the writing skills!!
    Overall Enjoyment -> {10/10}
    I was definitely kept entertained and I would definitely keep reading more of this fabulous story!
    Recommend?
    Definitely! Go check it out right now!!
    Total Marks - {99/100}
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