Book: VIBgYOR Part 1: Catching Pace
Author: KingOfTheTwilight
Reviewer: idkmayastyles
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Title: 8/10
I really like the title because it's very unique and I've never seen one like it.
Cover: 5/10
I don't like the cover because some of the words blend into the background, making it harder to read, but it's not the worst.
Blurb: 10/15
In my opinion, the blurb is good because of all the rhetorical questions asked.
Plot and concept 16/20
I like the concept of it, but it's not very original, but it's still good.
Content and chapters: 10/15
The chapters are long and that's really good and the paragraphs are the perfect size.
Writing skills: 5/10
Sometimes you add things into it that are not needed and I think you could fix that, but your writing style is good.
Overall and extra comments: 54/80
The title is unique but the cover isn't grabbing readers so maybe just add a new title and read over it as if you're the reader.