Book Name: The Aristocrat's Daughter
Author: annabellacx
Reviewer: AlysaKimera
Title: 6/6- It sums up the whole book well so no comments.
Cover: 6/7- Not bad. I love the cover but there are a few comments I would like to make. Firstly, I think the title is centered correctly and artistically on the book, but I think it could have been a bit better if it was a bit higher but just around that area. The second comment is that I believe it would have been better if the font of the cover is not being that transparent. It may be the font type and the design itself and if it is, I suggest that the author might need to change the design to make it opaque, so it won't clash with the background because, for the cover, the title looks confusing and hard to look at.
Blurb: 7/7- So far, I can't find any fault in the blurb, and it sums up the story perfectly. Well done.
World and Settings: 10/10- Very well written and described clearly. Well done.
Plot and concept: 10/10- I do love the concept of the social class between the rich and the poor and about relationships and friendships. I also love how Melanie's and Kai's relationship progressed and how it fell then how it became back to how it was again. I admire this storyline so well done.
Characters: 10/10- It is clearly described for me, but it could have been described better and a bit more specific for some characters. But overall, it's okay.
Content and chapters: 10/10- The pacing isn't too fast or too slow, so far so good. Also, the chapters are arranged nicely so there will be no confusion for the readers, and it is written nicely.
Writing Skills: 20/20- So far, no mistakes in spelling and grammar. Although the vocabulary used is not that extensive, but it had communicated the emotion and the meaning that the characters were used in different scenarios clearly. I also like the use of dialog in the story so well done.
Style and Theme: 10/10- Overall, the style of writing although is not as mature as those awards winning authors (yes, I mean you Rick Riordan and J.K.Rowling), (it) still communicate the story and the emotions held in this story to the readers clearly and this is a good achievement. It could be improved by analyzing the way of writing a novel by famous novelists and of course, practice and it takes years to master the art of writing (I am still learning as well) but at this level, it is already good enough. Well done. For the theme though, I could see the main theme as I read the story and that the main theme and the other themes are shown clearly on every chapter of the book so well done.
Enjoyment and engagement: 10/10- Overall, this book catches my attention not because of the sex scenes but because of the storyline and the plot that keeps me wanting to read more. Not that many books catch my interest like this but this book catches my interest so well done for the author.
Overall and Extra comments: 99/100- Overall, this book is a really good book to read, and that the author had done a great job for this book. Well done.
Also, thank you for letting me be your reviewer author-chan and sorry for your overdue review.